The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/08
Very well done! This gives a lot of food for thought and is written beautifully.

Thank you.
11/01/08
I have chills. It is amazing the way you brought this together... This was so well written I have nothing to critique.. Great job. I think you will definitely be one of the contenders for this week, atleast I hope so, for this story was the ultimate story of Christmas Countdown, a countdown for freedom.
Wow! This surely came from the Holy Spirit. Praise God. I love the dialogue and the intensity and passion between Father and Son and the love our Heavenly Father and Christ haas for man. Check out "I Give My Beloved Son",that's at the end of Beginners, it's similiar to this. It was nice to see the pieces being written in a different perspective. Again great job! God bless your writing. Keep it up! :0))