The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! I love this. Other than a little bit of minor rhythm problem this is wonderfully written. I love the build up of emotion and distraction over the course of time and the message. How sadly true that we all have been guilty of getting side tracted during our preparation of Christmas. Nicely done! I like this alot! God bless your gift and insight!!!:0)
Clever and a very good reminder of what this season is truly about. Wonderful to read.
I loved this. I've never really gotten into poetry until these past few weeks reading the challenges.
Thank you for a beautiful, heart-felt one.
11/01/08
Good job. The rythm was misplaced in a couple of places but the message was much needed. Keep writing.
11/02/08
There may have been a slight "flow problem" with the poetry, but the thoughts are really heart serching. We all need to be reminded of the prescious SON! God bless you for putting it into this poem. Cheery Blossom
Good job and great message. Well done. :)
11/06/08
Lovely poem - I really enjoyed the last line of each verse. If you want to think a bit more about meter(rhythm of the poetry), take a look at Jan's masterclass with that name on the message boards. A really useful resource.