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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Countdown to Christmas/Advent (10/23/08)

TITLE: The Ten Days Of Christmas
By Brian Haugrud
10/24/08


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On the first day of Christmas, the Savior said to me.
Just accept Me and you truly will be free.
On the second day of Christmas, My Savior said to me.
Go and tell some others, and I will give them eyes to see.

On the third day of Christmas, my Savior said to me.
Please worship Me, and bow on bended knee.
On the forth day of Christmas, my Savior said to me.
Seek out the meek and lowly, and tell them I hear their plea.

On the fifth day of Christmas, my Savior said to me.
Let the people know that salvation has no fee.
On the sixth day of Christmas, my Savior said to me.
That I am in their midst when two or three agree.

On the seventh day of Christmas, my Savior said to me.
I was the one who hung, on that first Christmas tree.
On the eighth day of Christmas, my Savior said to me.
Because of My blood, youíre no longer a refugee.

On the ninth day of Christmas, my Savior said to me.
Because you believed, youíll never be the way you used to be.
On the tenth day of Christmas, my Savior said to me.
Please come to Heaven, for I have paid the admission fee.

My Savior is now calling, to all who have an ear.
Do you want a life of freedom, with no need to live in fear?
I was here from the beginning, and will be here in the end,
Iím the Alfa and Omega, and to Me your will must bend.

As we get close to Christmas, let us take the time to pause.
And remember there is more than the mere Santa Clause.
That itís a time for forgiving, all the mistakes of the past,
And then to put our trust in Jesus, the only One who will last.

For without Him at Christmas, there is no song to sing.
There could not be a melody, in our ears that would ring.
We would walk through this life with our sins from the past.
So let us try to remember, ďThe Ten Days Of Christmas.Ē


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Carol Shaffron10/31/08
Very, very clever!
Karlene Jacobsen 11/01/08
You had me trying to sing it to the tune of the 12 Days of Christmas. I can't remember the entire tune, like the part that is drawn out [5 golden rings, i think.]

Anyway, this was well done. The message is clear. Thank you.
Racheal Chand11/01/08
This was well done...and very true. Good job.