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Good story. A reminder to enjoy the little things in life and count our blessings.
An unusual angle - I'm glad it had a happy ending.
Most stories about the homeless are riddled with self-pity and sadness. This story was unique in that it focused on God's provisions even in troubling circumstances.

I enjoyed your MC's voice, and I enjoyed the message that you conveyed with this piece. Keep up the good writing! I want to see more of your works.
First I love the title and how it twists into the story. Excellent perspective in writing this story. Can't wait to see the results.
With much love,
Wow! I'm so excited for you that your writing lately. You are finding something inside yourself that I don't know if you knew was there. I'm sooo proud of you I could bust! Can't wait to see your next piece! Love your friend, Ms. Lisa