The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/08
Good story. A reminder to enjoy the little things in life and count our blessings.
10/26/08
An unusual angle - I'm glad it had a happy ending.
Most stories about the homeless are riddled with self-pity and sadness. This story was unique in that it focused on God's provisions even in troubling circumstances.

I enjoyed your MC's voice, and I enjoyed the message that you conveyed with this piece. Keep up the good writing! I want to see more of your works.
First I love the title and how it twists into the story. Excellent perspective in writing this story. Can't wait to see the results.
With much love,
Coryn
10/29/08
Wow! I'm so excited for you that your writing lately. You are finding something inside yourself that I don't know if you knew was there. I'm sooo proud of you I could bust! Can't wait to see your next piece! Love your friend, Ms. Lisa