The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/08
Lovely - I could picture all the activity as it unfolded.
10/26/08
Lots of activity there to see. We often forget to think about birds and animals at winter time.

I thought that your first sentence could actually stand alone as an introduction, grabbing the reader'a attention.
This was a delightful read. I could picture all of the critters running around, scavenging their food. Good job with this! I appreciate you sharing it. Keep up the good writing! :)