The Official Writing Challenge
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A nice slant on the topic.
07/19/05
Sounds like fun to me!
Very vivid descriptions of your camping experience. Thanks for sharing. God bless ya, littlelight
07/20/05
Some very nice descriptions. :)
I especially liked the first sentence. :-) I enjoyed the story--good job!
07/21/05
Some sparks here toward a quality piece, a little heavy on process. Keep working.
Love the negativity leading up to a positive note at the end. Thanks for sharing.
07/22/05
Glad that you eventually had some fun! Good description of the snoring Dad! It would have enriched my understanding of your character if I knew how he felt about the 'lost' brother.
07/23/05
McDonalds for breakfast? Now, that is my sort of camping!
07/23/05
Too fun! Loved the chainsaw line. Ha! Thanks for taking us through your camping experience. Well done!
Blessings, Lynda