The Official Writing Challenge
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10/23/08
Loved your descriptions of the care pkgs! This story took me right back to college days...
And those "no bakes" are my all-time fave's.. we grew up baking them w/ my Mom.

A very enjoyable read!

p.s. And yes, we really are good bakers in Texas... ;-)
10/23/08
What a delightful story. I can identify with the single mom having her children do the cooking. But the last paragraphs are the crux of the whole thing. Thanks for the reminder. Good job!
I loved your entry for this week's challenge. You did a great job on this story and I enjoyed it very much. Keep up the good work.
Wow. This was a great story. One of my favorites in beginners this week! If you keep on writing like this, then I don't expect you to stay in beginners for long. :)

Your descriptions made me hungry, and I appreciate the lesson that you tucked in this as well.

Thank you for sharing this.
10/30/08
Good job, Margaret. I loved your story and especially your last line. No we can't give like Jesus, but we can give....... Congratulations!