The Official Writing Challenge
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10/23/08
thank God for recipes!

and thank God for HIS recipe!

...great job.
10/25/08
I really liked the way that you paralleled your recipes with God's recipes.

There were a few stanzas that didn't flow as smoothly as some of the others, but this is something that can be worked on. I am not a poet, so I really can't give too much advice in this area.

This was an enjoyable read, and I really appreciate you sharing it.
10/25/08
I really enjoyed the ending. It flowed perfectly and the point was well made. In the beginning I would just simplify some of the stanzas. Sometimes the flow is broken if it is too wordy. You did a great job and the comparison of recipes was very unique. Keep writing.
10/27/08
I enjoyed your poem! Thanks for sharing it. I admire those who can write poetry. I liked the analogy of your recipe box and God's recipe for life. Look forward to reading more from you.