The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/08
Very sweet story!
10/18/08
Beautiful! A great punch ending, wraps the whole story up in a few but powerful ending words. Left me with the feeling that God does really care about what we care about!

Blessings
10/20/08
Beautiful story. You had me wrapped up in each phrase. Great begining and a cherry-on-top ending - wonderful.
Great story you had my attention from the first word.
Well done.
Blessings,
Norms
10/22/08
Nice job! Very touching and sweet. Flowed very nicely and to the point. Brought tears to my eyes.