The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/08
Lovely, descriptive writing.

My only suggestion is that this may have rambled a bit. If you were to organize it into paragraphs, it might flow more smoothly.

This had an overall modd of serenity that was very appealing.
10/18/08
That's "mood"!
10/20/08

This was an enjoyable read!
The message held in a Christmas tree that Christmas is approaching.

Keep writing and practice separating the paragraphs. This will not only prevent your writing from running all together ---- Also, for the reader it is a much easier and enjoyable read.

Thank you for sharing this.