The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/08
I'd never thought of a comparison between the cross and the Christmas tree!

This poem has a well-thought-out structure, and perhaps only needs a few revisions in meter to make it flow more evenly.

Very thought-provoking!
10/20/08
Well-written poem with a wonderful message. Just a couple meter changes here and there and you have a winner! Thanks for sharing your poem.