The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/08
Great story! I admire the way you made the point at the end, it needed not further explanation. Thanks for writing it.
10/18/08
How frustrating it must be to decipher the customs of so many Christian denominations!

This may be a bit light on topic, as the tree is introduced almost as an afterthought, and the focus is on Ben's unfamiliarity with this particular church.

Nice writing, and it gives the reader much to think about.
10/20/08
Nice flow to the story, very entertaining. Another good point you made - girls (and women) can talk about anything and everything. That part made me laugh.
Enjoyable story. I liked the point made. Good writing.
Blessings,
Norms