The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/08
Ooh, I'll have to check that out; the words are beautiful!
I could feel Matthew's excitment being old enough to go with the group and then, his disappointment at the man's first reaction. Love the touching ending.
I love the story, although I do have one question.
How does an 8 year old boy full of excitement walk cautiously? Keep writing.