The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/08
Fun, wry humor.

It's a good practice to put an extra "enter" between paragraphs for Challenge entries.

I really, really like the voice of this piece.
10/12/08
You seem to have the teenaged boy's attitude down. I like your writing - a very strong entry.
10/14/08
Interesting read. I can understand how the boy feels, but honestly, I think it is more fun to be carolling then to be doing anything else when the time comes. Thank you for making me feel in the mood for carolling already!
02/09/09
Hey fearless teacher! Nice story! I wonder why you've got the teenager tone down (as another offered!) hmmm... I really like how you focused fully on the Holy Spirit at the end, and the picture of the girl's face. This would have put me in the Christmas spirit, in fact, it's almost Valentine's Day and I think I'm in the spirit now!