The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/08
A sweet story--I'd love to read more about this experience!

Be careful of capitalization and punctuation...there were a few places that needed a quick edit.

Glad that your single's group was willing to take on this important ministry.
10/12/08
Nice testimony of the joy and blessings the CAROLLER receives! I'd like to see your examples fleshed out a bit - more descriptions of the people and their reactions and surroundings. Make your story come to life for the reader! Thank you for writing and submitting your experience - I enjoyed it. :) Cat
10/16/08
Thanks for sharing this story about making a differece in the lives of others.