The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/08
A short little snippet of the season!

For future consideration: Challenge entries are supposed to have at least 150 words. For your next challenge, consider writing more, and elminiating abbreviations and run-on sentences.

Your writing has potential, and I hope to read another entry from you next week!
10/12/08
I like how you compare the affect of Christmas carols to magic that never ends as long as we keep singing His praises in our heart. Closer attention to your punctuation and grammar would strengthen your writing AND the power of your message.