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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Christmas Carols/Carolling (10/02/08)

TITLE: The sounds & joy of the hoildays
By mary bernard
10/06/08


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While I was putting up my xmas tree I heard someone singing it was coming out side my door . I open the door long and behold I saw a group of children and adults singing xmas songs and I join in with them at that time everything I saw and sing was magic all around me when they left the magic had stopped . But I saw the magic was also, In my house I can still hear them singing in my ears a right thru my soul I sing to my heart content . I decided to go my chruch for xmas eve for mass as I left I saw some more carolling It is so wonderful I love xmas merry xmas everyone.


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Jan Ackerson 10/09/08
A short little snippet of the season!

For future consideration: Challenge entries are supposed to have at least 150 words. For your next challenge, consider writing more, and elminiating abbreviations and run-on sentences.

Your writing has potential, and I hope to read another entry from you next week!
Catrina Bradley 10/12/08
I like how you compare the affect of Christmas carols to magic that never ends as long as we keep singing His praises in our heart. Closer attention to your punctuation and grammar would strengthen your writing AND the power of your message.