The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the bit at the end, with the contrast between Santa, and Frosty, and then Jesus.

I couldn't quite place a time on this--you mention carriages, and your homeless urchins seem to come from another century--but "Frosty" is a relatively modern song. Maybe some clarification would help?

Love the ending--nicely done.
Very creative take on the topic - going through Santa and Frosty in a search for the true meaning of Christmas... and you're right - Santa only likes us when we're good. (never thought about it that way before). Good job!
Very imaginative. Great take on the theme.
The carol brought the Message to Tommy and even if there is a juxtaposition of time with the modern day carol and the carriage, the idea is a good one.
I should have written Tommy and Bill.
When we search for HIM we will find HIM. Good job in telling this truth.
Great take on this topic.
Excellent work! I really liked the way Tim stuck with Bill. (I hope I remembered the names right) And the way you used the secular songs. Very creative.