The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/08
I love the bit at the end, with the contrast between Santa, and Frosty, and then Jesus.

I couldn't quite place a time on this--you mention carriages, and your homeless urchins seem to come from another century--but "Frosty" is a relatively modern song. Maybe some clarification would help?

Love the ending--nicely done.
Very creative take on the topic - going through Santa and Frosty in a search for the true meaning of Christmas... and you're right - Santa only likes us when we're good. (never thought about it that way before). Good job!
10/13/08
Very imaginative. Great take on the theme.
10/14/08
The carol brought the Message to Tommy and even if there is a juxtaposition of time with the modern day carol and the carriage, the idea is a good one.
10/14/08
I should have written Tommy and Bill.
When we search for HIM we will find HIM. Good job in telling this truth.
Great take on this topic.
Excellent work! I really liked the way Tim stuck with Bill. (I hope I remembered the names right) And the way you used the secular songs. Very creative.