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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Christmas Carols/Carolling (10/02/08)

TITLE: Who is Carol?
By Edmond Ng
10/06/08


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"Who is Carol? What did she do that we should celebrate this holiday?" asked the puzzled man in his native language.

"Carol is not a person. Carol is the song of joy and praise we sing during Christmas," answered the missionary.

"O, I see, I thought you're referring to someone who has done something great that we are celebrating this special holiday."

"You are right! We are singing carols because Someone did something great, and He is continuing to do something great every day."

"Huh? You mean you are singing carols because someone did something? What great thing did he do?"

"Well, He came from heaven to earth to show the way, and mildly for a short time laid His glory by, born that man no more may die, born to raise the sons of earth, born to give them second birth."

"Second birth? How can these things be? How can a man be born when he is old? He cannot enter a second time into his mother's womb and be born, can he?"

"Truly, truly, I say to you, unless one is born of water and the Spirit he cannot enter into the kingdom of God, except and unless he believes in the Son. He who believes in the Son has eternal life; but he who does not obey the Son will not see life, but the wrath of God abides on him."

"Who is this Son you are talking about?"

"He is Christ, by highest heaven adored. Christ, the everlasting Lord; Late in time behold Him come, offspring of a virgin's womb. Veiled in flesh the Godhead see; Hail the Incarnate Deity, pleased as man with man to dwell; Jesus, our Emmanuel."

"I see, you are talking about Christ the Incarnate Deity! But what did He do that man is celebrating this holiday?"

"He came from heaven to earth to show the way and from the earth to the cross, our debts He paid, and from the cross to the grave, from the grave to the sky, the Lord's name deserves to be lifted high, for whoever believes in Him, shall never die, but have eternal life!"

"O, I see, why didn't you tell me earlier? Now I know Christmas is about Christ and not about Carol! Help me then to receive Christ, 'coz I wanna receive eternal life!"

Hark! The herald angels sing. Glory to the newborn King! Peace on earth and mercy mild, God and sinners reconciled. Joyful all ye nations, rise, Join the triumph of the skies, with the angelic host proclaim, Christ is born in Bethlehem. Hail, the heaven-born Prince of Peace! Hail, the Son of Righteousness, light and life to all He brings, risen with healing in His wings.


NOTE: This article makes references to the Christmas carol 'Hark! The Herald Angels Sing', the song 'Lord I live Your Name on High' by Donnie McClurkin, and the Gospel of John chapter 3.


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Jan Ackerson 10/09/08
Interesting approach--using bits of Christmas carols and other songs to witness.

All-dialogue pieces are hard to do well--consider add descriptions of the action, the speakers, the surroundings, in order to put your reader in the scene. As it is, it's just back-and-forth words.

I liked the way you found just the right carols to speak to the man's heart.
Phyllis Inniss 10/13/08
I like this interesting approach to tell about Jesus and His birth and why we sing carols. You were very creative in finding the right carols to answer the questions.
Catrina Bradley 10/13/08
A very unique approach! I agree with Jan - a bit of narrative would spice it up, but I enjoyed this just like it is, too.
Karlene Jacobsen 10/13/08
I like your angle on this. I'd be interested to know where the man is from who didn't know carol...
Joy Faire Stewart10/15/08
I love the approach you took with the topic. Wonderful and touching devotional
Leah Nichols 10/16/08
I'm glad that the man wanted to receive Christ but I think it would definitely be confusing if someone was talking to me like that. LOL But a very creative take on the topic. Nice work!