The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/08
This is quite intriguing--I'm actually quite interested in the "story behind the story". How old are Beth and Ben? How did they come to the Presbyterian Church? I assume that they have become Christians--how did that happen? And you also could have expanded this to write more about the unfamiliarity of new Christians with Christian "jargon". A great start, and a great idea--use your full 750 words and take it to the next level!
What a wonderful point of view-how new Christians would see Christmas. Odd, how there are some traditions that we take for granted, and do we really know who King Wenceslas was?
Enjoyed, Josephine