The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/08
This is very cute--I'd love to see it expanded. Write a bit of dialogue between two cousins, have someone say "oof" when Cousin Emily falls on her lap, show us the decorations on the mantel, that sort of thing. It's really a fun story.
10/14/08
Seems like a great start to something - as suggested earlier I would definitely expand on this.
10/15/08
This is humorous and sort of lively. Enjoyment is the keynote here and what better way than to do it as a family - and a choir was born.