The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/08
Lovely little slice of life--I like it!

Consider breaking your longer paragraphs into shorter, more digestible "bites".

Thanks for sharing this mini-memoir.
10/09/08
What a lovely story. So glad you were able to join in with your favourite carol.
Blessings,
Norms