The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/08
I really like the way you introduced bits and pieces of lots of different familiar carols.

Be careful of using too many simple or familiar rhymes--like "love" and "above", and a few others. Stretch to find rhymes that'll take your reader by surprise.

This is the first one I read today, and it's putting me in the Christmas spirit!
12/03/09
Brian, I plan to use this delightful Christmas poem for the Front Page Showcase for the week of Dec. 7. Look for it on the Faithwriters home page--and congratulations!
12/11/09
Brian, I'm so glad this was showcased as I had not read it before. This was delightful and inspiring. I truly enjoyed the way you wove familiar carols into your verses, and of course your wrap up verse was perfect. Great job!