The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the corollary between the fight between sin and salvation and a sports arena.
It got slightly confusing after the first paragraph, but a second read cleared it up.
Good way to show the struggle between angels and demons!
I like the way you write the story. It's filled with emotions and struggles, describing the battle within the call to salvation. Very nicely written.
I'd love to see this expanded, it's a great vision you could really run with. Awesome analogy!
Great analogy - would love to see this expanded upon. A bit more description of what is going on, instead of just telling us, might keep this more engaging. Keep writing for His glory!