The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the corollary between the fight between sin and salvation and a sports arena.
It got slightly confusing after the first paragraph, but a second read cleared it up.
Good way to show the struggle between angels and demons!
09/18/08
I like the way you write the story. It's filled with emotions and struggles, describing the battle within the call to salvation. Very nicely written.
09/19/08
I'd love to see this expanded, it's a great vision you could really run with. Awesome analogy!
09/20/08
Great analogy - would love to see this expanded upon. A bit more description of what is going on, instead of just telling us, might keep this more engaging. Keep writing for His glory!