The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/08
Your descriptions of the drowning dream are amazingly vivid - almost makes me ask if you had a near-drowning incident yourself. Wonderfully engaging writing.
09/22/08
I almost drown once and this was way too realistic. You took the reader into the moment with you to say the least. Great analogies.