The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/08
Excellent job of working this analogy throughout the piece - wonderfully done. I LOVE especially the last stanza.
09/21/08
I love your creative approach to the topic. A lovely poem with a perfect message. Well done!
09/22/08
There's a great message in this poem. Thanks for sharing it!
This is a great poem, analogy carried throughout, and right on topic. Nice work.
This is really good. A wonderful take on the topic. Well written and easy to read. I too, especially like the last stanza. God Bless
Nice poetry form. Message flowed well throughout each stanza. Good job. :)
09/24/08
Very good rhyming here with the perfect message.
No critique, only applaus! Wonderful poem!