The Official Writing Challenge
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Love the message in the poem. Great job with the topic, very enjoyable.
09/19/08
Great poem. I loved the reference to Ecclesiastes and "All is meaningless". Your last verse threw me because you changed the pattern and rhyme structure.
09/20/08
Solomon was a wise man; he saw that our earthly life was nothing. Good poem.
09/21/08
Well constructed poem with a message that never grows old. Well done and may it be a blessing to all who read it. Vince.
10/23/08
"Meaningless! Meaningless!"...Good points brought out here in this poem, Linda...Were I a judge, I would immediately promote you OUT OF Beginner's. This is worthy of a higher category...Yes, we all need to take stock of our values in life...Many things we count necessary end up being "Meaningless! Meaningless!"...Thanks for the wonderful, timely advice--to set our goals higher than this life...May God bless you as you continue to live and write for Him...Helen
09/11/09
Wow! This is great poetry...and a wonderful message about what really is and is not important in life. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem, I appreciate it.