The Official Writing Challenge
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07/11/05
Fun poem. It captures the feeling of vacation and leisure and also the awe of praise. Nice job.
07/11/05
Amen. Delightful reading. God bless ya,
littlelight
07/12/05
Nice poem, I like it when matched verse poetry is kept short like this. Beat and measure were not consistant, but the true meaning rang through.
Thank you for posting.
07/13/05
Make sure you copyright this, it is very good.
God is blessing you!
07/14/05
Nice descriptions -a nice poem.
Enjoyed the ending punch line!
07/18/05
Your poem captured the vacation spirit and the enjoyment experienced. For everything give thanks.
07/19/05
Thank you for your very helpful comment on Going Through The Change. It went through a change (LOL) if you would like to see what you think about it after your suggestion. God bless, and enjoyed reading your poem again.
littlelight