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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Snap (09/04/08)

TITLE: Hello Lord
By Deborah Ann Belka
09/05/08


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Hello Lord

Iím calling you today
Because my best friend
Had nothing positive to say!

It seems her kids
Are giving her a fit
And she heading towards
The end of her wit!

So . . .

I called up another
And asked her to lunch
But, she had more to deal with
Was my best hunch!

So . . .

I called up my husband
At the place of his work
But, he was having a bad day
Because of some jerk!

So . . .

I called up my neighbor
And asked her over for tea
But, she was having a hard time
With her housemaid's knee!

So . . .

I called up my daughter
To see how she was doing
But, the fight she had with her husband
Was still brewing!

So . . .

I called a church friend
To ask her to pray
But, she was having
A way too busy of a day!

So . . . .

I called up my Son
To give him some hope
But, he just lost his job
And was at the end of his rope!

So . . .

I called up my mom
And asked her for some support
But, her ship it seems
Just left the port!

So . . .


I think Iíll just call it a wrap
Because everyone I know
Is about to snap!


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Yvonne Blake 09/12/08
Smile...very creative! While you were praying, I think all the others needed prayer.
*THIS SPARKLES*
Mary Alice Bowles09/12/08
Very interesting and so very true. Good job !!