The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/08
Interesting way of writing about John the Baptist. The sequence seemed out of order and a bit confusing. I like the way that you intermingled the Scripture.
09/12/08
I agree with Yvonne, and I would add theat the "snap" entries seemed a bit forced. Other than that, the descriptive writing and retelling of the John the Baptist story was good.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

09/14/08
It's good to take on board the helpful criticisms of others and not become discouraged. You clearly know your Scriptures. Your challenge now is to shape your stories so that they flow more smoothly. Hang on in there and become a polished arrow in the Lord's quiver.
09/17/08
Sometimes critics' comments are hard on the writer. They are usually given in the love of the Lord. Watch the who and whom, and recheck spelling.