The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/08
Nicely done! The conversational, regional tone drew me in.
Wow! and again I say, Wow! This is a GREAT read. Yes, I love the conversational feel too. It feels very authentic. Amazing job!
09/04/08
I loved the conversational tone. A little proofreading is all it needs. You missed the word of at the end of the 3rd line and in 6th paragraph you have cleared instead of clear. But it didn't interrupt the flow. I especially loved the ending.
09/11/08
Congratulations on your 2nd place win! Keep up the good work.
I'm so tickled & delighted for you! And proud of you, Sis! (gleeful too that it was partly my words of encouragement that got you writing again.:-D)