The Official Writing Challenge
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Your ability to show the scene is incredible I felt like I could see everything-like watching a movie. (I think, but I am not yet a professional).

I love the way you turned the question back on Dartag. He'll never choose truth.

Great job! You set the scene really good. We knew who was talking and felt fear. Wonderful work! I especially loved the ending! How clever!!!
Though I did not get to read this earlier, I love it. It deserves the placemnt awarded to you. Congratulations.
Congratulations on your EC. What a great accomplishment out of Beginners. Very nice job with the topic.
Very engaging and well written - it really was like the reader was there! May you walk under continued anointing! Thank you!
Congratulations on placing! I had a feeling it would. This is an excellent piece.
Wow - so powerful. Your descriptions are incredibly vivid. Congratulations on your Editor's Choice third place overall. That is remarkable, especially from a "beginner."
Very good, there isn't a thing I could add to what has already been said.
I like the descriptions of the MC's playing partners - and you worked a great message within this unique story. Congratulations on the EC!
Judy -- Congrats on your level placing and your EC with this creative story. Wow!
This is a wonderful piece. The description of the demon, his words, and his attitude, almost stank of evil. The response that your MC gave was also really well chosen, picking a sin that can be so easily born by looking to God. I really wanted to know what the final Truth would have been!