The Official Writing Challenge
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09/06/08
I love the ending.

Some parts were a bit confusing. It seemed like this was a conversation between someone and their conscience. It might make it a bit more clear if you but the thoughts, or the voice that's accusing in italics.

This had a great message. Great job.
09/06/08
Thank you for sharing this. It was creative but also a bit confusing. You do have a great message, though.