The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/08
Nice devotional piece. Good reminder of how our God pulls for us.
09/05/08
Having watched "A Christmas Story" for many years and lived in the area where the story is supposed to take place, I absolutely loved your entry!


Great job.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

09/06/08
Oh my! I loved this! Great job! Just be sure to put a space between your paragraphs next time so it's easier to read. Wonderful, wonderful devotional!!!
Great devotional piece. I love the message weaved in with a familiar childhood story.

Yes, it is a gift that beats all others. Great devotional on the topic, very enjoyable.
Great devotional. True for all but especially important for young people, I think. Thanks for writing out this message. :)
09/10/08
Awesome devotion! The story is perfect for powerful message. It may have been a bit smoother if you'd used the boys' names instead of "the first boy" and "the other boy", and maybe break it into more that one paragraph, but I loved everything else about it. Very smooth, nice flow from story into message. Wonderful job!