The Official Writing Challenge
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this was a great reminder of the "truth or dare" game satan played with Jesus, and a reminder to all of us that if satan is willing to tempt Jesus,then we being human, are easy targets for him. Thank you for sharing
This entry started off so original and interesting that I was glued to the page, but then it kind of flew off in a different direction.

The writing is solid, but you needed to tie the beginning middle and end together.

No doubt at all that you have great potential!

Thanks for taking the time to write such good stuff!

May God bless!

Dan Blankenship

I agree you started your entry out in a most creative way and then you transitioned us into Jesus' life. It was a very big transition:) Maybe a good start to two different writings? Something for you to think about anyway. Good job, in any case.