The Official Writing Challenge
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08/29/08
I like the point you made in your last paragraph a LOT. We cannot be patient without God's help. Well said!
08/30/08
Well done!
Good points made here. I would suggest you reread over it and revise it a bit. There are many grammatical errors. In that last large paragraph you said "rip the consequences" and I think you meant "reap" them. Little things like that will help it flow better for the reader. Good job. Keep writing.
09/02/08
[I have met many people in my life and a few are really difficult to handle.]

I think I bumped in to most of those people this week!

LOL.

Good entry. I think you just needed to proofread a little longer before submitting it.

Try having someone else proofread it, too.

I rarely catch my own mistakes. My wife and daughter are really good at pointing them out, though.

:-)

May God bless and keep you writing.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship