The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/08
Great job with details showing this frazzled mom's morning. The scenes were vivid and most moms can relate. I wasn't expecting the reason the mom didn't want to pray for patiences...I LOL.
08/29/08
I really like this story. Very true to life, and I enjoyed the fast pace of it. Well done.