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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Anger (01/24/05)

TITLE: Other Part of Me
By Lisa O'Neal
01/24/05


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There is a pain,
Which cuts deeply within me.
The heat is magnified
By the beats of my heart.

A world where time
Never stops.
Now becomes a halted
Moment in space.

Any motion made is
Captured by a piercing eye.
The cutting glance conquered
Only by the frigid air abounding.

Overwhelming, overtaking
Emotions well up beyond me.
Questions have no answer Ė
Meaning has no reason.

Bitterness, hatred, enemies
Of manís heart.
Anger, strife, selfish
Passions sent to torment manís soul.


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Karen O'Leary01/31/05
Good start. What made the man angry? Did I miss something? Best wishes with your writing.
Karen
Phyllis Inniss 02/01/05
I hope you can conquer that pain and resolve whatever is tormnting you.
Norma OGrady02/01/05
Thank you for sharing this.
Yeshua Bless
Deborah Anderson02/05/05
Interesting piece. God bless you.