The Official Writing Challenge
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08/29/08
Clever title and theme!
09/02/08
"eyelids shut made heavy by the everyday bump and grind"

I'm not sure if you need a comma after "shut" or not, but that part sounded a little weird.

Other than that little spot, it was a good read. I know where Stephen is. :-)


May God bless and keep you writing.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship