The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/08
How sad for Emma to lose her family so tragically. I wasn't sure how this fit the topic until I read the ending. Good job giving the reader some insight into the dangers missionary's face as they do God's work.
08/29/08
Oh, tragic. Oh my. Glad to see a hopeful message tied in at the end.
08/30/08
You did a very good job recounting this story. There were some point of view shifts, though. You can PM me to ask me where if you want. That's one thing I really struggled with as a beginner and even now:)
09/01/08
Wow, what a moving testimony to the power of God to give us the strength to forgive others.

Great work.

May God bless.
Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship