The Official Writing Challenge
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08/29/08
heartwretching story that brought tears to my eyes when I read it. You captured your characters nicely this is very well written thank you for sharring it.
This was incredible. I was caught at every word. This is well-written bringing a reality that sadly some have to live and learn through. Great job!
08/30/08
This is absolutely wonderfully written, from beginning to end. I was completely engrossed and "there" all the way through. I can't imaging you'll be in beginners for long.
09/01/08
EXCELLENT!

Definitely in the running this week.

I couldn't stop reading it. Not that I was trying to stop.

You can weave a story very well.

I felt like I was in the room with you and Edith.

May God bless.
Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

09/01/08
Fantastic! I "know" Edith from this story as you've painted her character very well. And I agree with Joanne that you'll be moving out of Beginner's in no time :)
09/01/08
Marvelous entry! The opening line is a grabber, and your writing is witty and engaging. Super job. :) Cat
09/02/08
Gee, are you sure you didn't know my mother-in-law? :-)

Great job. I agree with the others that you will be moving out of Beginners quickly.
Still in beginners, but Jenni, I knew you would get recognized with this entry. 5th place, highly commended....great job Jenni!