The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good read! I was 'rushing' right along with her! But when she saw the need, you could see her compassion kicking in.
Loved it!
08/30/08
I could definitely feel her emotions throughout - from beginning to end. Nicely done.
09/01/08
Yes, in moments like that...our impatience seems so silly. Those time-stopping moments really get our attention, don't they?

May God bless.
Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

09/01/08
Good descriptions. Could see the scene in my mind very clearly and identify with the emotions on both sides. Very nicely put.