The Official Writing Challenge
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08/29/08
I am a nurse too, and can greatly relate to your story. Alot of untold stress, I hope things are well now.
08/29/08
I loved your whole "virtuous" saying - made me giggle too. It sounds like you, like many others, have been through quite a lot. Praising God for his provision. Nicely written.
09/01/08
I absolutely loved this entry. The only error is not really an error. It would have read easier with an extra space in between the paragraphs.

I think you write a lot like I do. This made your piece especially enjoyable. I'm my own favorite writer, so that would make you my second favorite. :-)

Anyhow, back to the review. Your story is so good because you vividly pointed out how hard it is sometimes for us to listen to what God is trying to tell us.

I like the progressive events that made me go "again!", "again!", "oh no, one more thing!"

Excellent entry. Please e-mail me the (ministry) URL address for your website after the contest this week.

Great work.
May God bless.
Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship