The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked this character. She seemed grounded in the Lord.
The ending was a bit abrupt though.
I'd like to find out what happened next!
08/28/08
Talk about sticking to the topic...you got it right on the money.

Try adding an extra space in between paragraphs. It makes the story easier to read.

I really liked when the woman decided to look up Bible stories about famous women in the Bible.

Good story!
May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

08/29/08
I'm sure many have been through this very experience - thank you for giving them a voice. The ending did come a bit abruptly - bet you wish you had more words!
Thanks for sharing.