The Official Writing Challenge
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True that! What a wonderful, patient Lord we have. Lovely devotional piece!
08/28/08
Very well written. It speaks of truth. Thankyou for the reminder to be patient just as God is patient.
08/28/08
Good visuals - I see the crying daughter, the kneading cat, the needing husband. This makes good writing. And, of course, the premise of our need for patience is clearly stated.
Good, solid entry.

I would have made it a little more personal, though.

A little more about the subtle differences between your specific circumstances and every other family's.

But definitely a good read.

Thanks for writing.

May God bless.
Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship



08/29/08
Very good take on the topic, with, I agree, some great visuals. Enjoyed this read.