The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/08
Oh, that was good! You can really draw in the reader! And the end was priceless!
08/28/08
Funny!

Good weave.

Loved the interaction between father and daughter.

I would have separated the dialogue with an extra space, though.

Other than that minor issue, AWESOME entry!

Keep up the good work.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship




08/29/08
this was the best story I've read yet!
08/29/08
Cute, clever, and definitely fun! Enjoyed this.