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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Patience (08/21/08)

TITLE: PEACE IN...T
By Renee Huff
08/22/08


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PEACE IN...T

There is peace in...Times of trial.

There is peace in...Times of loss.

There is peace in...Times of distress.

There is peace in...Times of chaos.


Peace! Peace! Is there such a thing?

There is too much going on!

We are all too busy to find such treasure,

Yet we need it to live on.


Patience is what we lack.

We are all in such a hurry.

Patience is what we need

To slow down our time of fury.


How do we bring these two P's together

So they may find common ground?

If you look a little closer

Your answer will be found.


Look up above at the title

And you will surely see,

Changing the letters of the words

Will give you patience in "Peace in...T"


It is when we are at peace

In all the T's we face,

That patience will abide and prove

God's amazing grace.


I know this poem may sound lame

To many who are very well versed.

But finding patience in "Peace in...T"

I bet I am the first!


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Angie Ragg08/28/08
Very clever. I love it when there is a play on words. Enjoyed this very much!
Dan Blankenship 08/28/08
Yes, you are the first.

Nice way to come at the challenge from a different angle. Very creative.

May God bless.
Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

Joanne Sher 08/29/08
Creative piece with a great messagge. Nicely done.