The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/08
One of the best I have read so far. Good Job! Keep Writing.
08/28/08
Interesting. I always love P.E., hated math. Always wanted to run away from math.

:-)

Like the title and that you kept the title repeating in the poem.

Good show!

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

08/28/08
I really enjoyed your poem! Thanks for sharing it with us. I look forward to reading more. I like the transition from wanting others to wait for you, then waiting for God.
08/28/08
Wonderful use of repetition, and an excellent job with the rhyme and meter. Excellent message as well. Enjoyed this very much.
Love the theme. It flowed so well, I thought.

Reading it out loud, I felt as though God was talking in the end directly to me everytime He said, "Please wait for ME."

Great job!
So very Beautiful....
08/30/08
wonderful writing! I loved it!