The Official Writing Challenge
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One of the best I have read so far. Good Job! Keep Writing.
Interesting. I always love P.E., hated math. Always wanted to run away from math.


Like the title and that you kept the title repeating in the poem.

Good show!

May God bless.

Dan Blankenship

I really enjoyed your poem! Thanks for sharing it with us. I look forward to reading more. I like the transition from wanting others to wait for you, then waiting for God.
Wonderful use of repetition, and an excellent job with the rhyme and meter. Excellent message as well. Enjoyed this very much.
Love the theme. It flowed so well, I thought.

Reading it out loud, I felt as though God was talking in the end directly to me everytime He said, "Please wait for ME."

Great job!
So very Beautiful....
wonderful writing! I loved it!