The Official Writing Challenge
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Your picture of a family charade of worship is too close to home for many. I, too, am thankful for a church where we can be real. May God help us to be really His when we get home.
With words you have painted a sad picture. Very good job writing on topic.
08/23/08
The first half of this read almost like a sweet, children's poem...and then it got darker...and darker. Very nice effect.
08/23/08
Ouch! That hit a little too close to home! Sadly, this reality is the truth in many homes today. Good job in exposing this in poetic form.