The Official Writing Challenge
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Through your contrasting characters, you offer a challenge to live wholly for the Lord.
You got me! I wasn't expecting Bobby and Robert to be the same person. This is a wonderful devotional, and I hope you share it.
08/23/08
Good job contrasting the two aspects of Bobby/Robert.

A note: "Who's" means "who is" or "who has". I think you wanted "Whose" in your title.

This would be a great devotional for a young men's teen discussion.
08/23/08
This is something I would like my teenaged son to read. You did a great job of showing the reality of so many Christians - being one way to one group of people and another to those at church. Good job!