The Official Writing Challenge
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I love your piece. Your tongue-in-cheek humor is just the kind I enjoy. Your collection of recipes, etc. is so like something I would do.
08/22/08
That's hilarious! I love it! Yes, society and the media would have us beleive that our lives are falling short unless we live the 'me first' lifestyle. thanks for the reminder of how the Spirit shows us a 'more excellent way"
08/23/08
Excellent writing--you have a very readable voice, and your readers will really relate to you. Nice touches of humor throughout.

Consider making shorter paragraphs, for your reader's sake. That's my only suggestion: this is a very, very good women's devotional.
08/28/08
Loved it, Sarah! You really spoke to some things that I'm going through lately, too!